A Million Things

There are more

Than a million things

About you that I adore. 

And if words should try

To describe you,

They will have to

Take a number and stand in line.

 

I'm longing for you

To spend every day at my side

I want to be able to hold you

And make you understand

Just how true my love for you is.

I need you to know

How my heart yearns for you…

 

 

I never thought I'd find someone

To believe in

Until you came into my life.

And if you ever need someone

To fall into,

I’ll be here…

 

 

 Copyright©JosieWentzel23June2008

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dempsey Wilson (D.L. Wi..]

Beautiful sentiment. The reciever of this love is a lucky guy! Keep up the good work!

[Raja]

"And if you ever need someone

To fall into,

I'll be here�" Such a nice expression and simplicity!!

Your poem communicates very well, and that is what is required in the peotry: the more it is communicative, the more will be its reach to the readers.

Thank you.

Raja.

[An owl on the moon]

I need you...

[The Autumn Faerie]

Aw, this is really sweet...

But you may want to darken the font a bit; it's a little hard to read.

Other than that, I adore it!