Addiction

It seems I am addicted to you,

Addicted to your eyes,

Addicted to your touch,

Addicted to your kiss,

Your lips.

 

It seems I am addicted to your charm,

Addicted to your passion,

Addicted to your rejection.

It’s what keeps me hanging on,

Wanting more,

Craving more,

Needing more.

 

I have to feel you

Running through my veins,

To feel your poison

Killing me slowly.

I live for this pain,

Live for this lost hope,

Live for these broken promises.

 

How do you keep me here?

Why do you keep me hanging?

It would seem that I

Cannot get enough of you!

 

Copyright©JosieWentzel31July2008

 

Reviews

[Raja]

I like the simple touch that you intend giving here by your planned measurement of words to rock with balance about the topic, 'Love'. The communicative part is your way of speaking - it seems real and omnipresent.

'It seems I am addicted to your charm,

Addicted to your passion,

Addicted to your rejection.

It's what keeps me hanging on,

Wanting more,

Craving more,

Needing more.'

I like this portion very much.

Thank you.

Raja

[Sonia]

I like this, good job!

[BrokenButterfly]

So simply stated and yet perfectly described. you don't bother with the confusing messes of long strings of complicated words that many use. this is a very nice piece of writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Gillzy]

Very powerful, and definitely something that many people can relate to. The urge to just keep hanging on in there... even just for the hint or promise of one glittering happy moment. You'll go through all kinds of rubbish, just for love, eh? Nicely written x