My Surrender

A Poem by Kitty

I give up.

I’ve forgotten what

I started fighting for!

I went into battle with myself

Over you,

And to this day,

I don’t know who won.

It was a stupid fight.

A futile one.

And now I raise my white flag

In surrender.

I won’t fight

With you anymore.

I won’t fight

For you any longer.

I give up…

© 2008 Kitty

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Wildecat

An extraordinary poem, with a superb ending.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lee E. Powell

The ending was awesome.

"I won't fight With you anymore.
I won't fight For you any longer.
I give up�

That's pretty powerful stuff. Straight to the point!

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kitty

Weltevredenpark, Johannesburg, South Africa

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Finding peace has always been a struggle for me. But if there is one thing I can wish for the world, it's peace, love, more tolerence, faith, hope and trust. I hope you find it somewhere out there.... more..