Stop. Rewind. Play.

Stop. Rewind. Play.

A Poem by Kitty

Press rewind,

Take me back to that moment.

I need to know

What would’ve happened

If this had been said;

What would’ve happened

If that had been done.

Play it back,

Let’s see it another time.

Stop.

Rewind.

Play it

And replay it over again.

Again and again

Until everything it was

Is no more…

 

Copyright©JosieWentzel03September2008

 

© 2008 Kitty


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"Until everything it was
Is no more�"

If only we could.
Very well written and an awesome concept

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neat idea...to play things back.
I like the ending, but I think it a simple period would fit better that the suspension points ( or wathever you guys call them lolz ).

A.M.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on October 17, 2008

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Kitty

Weltevredenpark, Johannesburg, South Africa



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Finding peace has always been a struggle for me. But if there is one thing I can wish for the world, it's peace, love, more tolerence, faith, hope and trust. I hope you find it somewhere out there.... more..