this trigger is yours

this trigger is yours

A Poem by JohnPate.

If i pull back this hammer swiftly,

Wont you hurry to kiss this barrel for me.

This time i promise to pull the trigger for thee.

© 2008 JohnPate.


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JohnPate.
its not good i know.

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no i think it's good dude. keep it up!

Posted 17 Years Ago
Don't be so down on yourself. It has a good base. I would like to see you to expand.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on February 12, 2008

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JohnPate.
JohnPate.

jeffersonville, IN



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John Pate is my name. I enjoy eating and cooking. To me music is a necessity to life. I have found that I very much like poetry. My friends, i try to keep close, who knows when you'll lose them. Im pr.. more..