Silver

Erotic element

Palms full of silver locks
Tongue slivered thru your pink box
Like a wet eel, shiver
Reveal to me that sexual beast you conceal
Wield a steel weapon to
Drill you to euphoric heaven
Threatened by this feeling
So - I make you love me
Viewing your body above me
Tiddies bounce in slow motion
You're unlike other women
We both coast in LSD ocean
Shamanic cactus potion
Gives me the notion of flummoxed passion
Trying to rationalize with my actions
I just want to f**k you like a rabid animal

Reviews

[Nia Lisa]

I like how your writing reveals you, which is revealed a bit in the "About" section. The poem itself is intense because you are genuine and honest with yourself about your sexuality.