Driven

A haiku

Spotted trout shimmer
Beneath cold sparkling waters
Driven by instinct.

Author's Note

A 4th haiku :) TY Ben, removed that extra syllable :)

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

Wow, you are so good at your nature poems too. I adore this. You've really captured the idea of the trout.

[FJ Davis]

Ah, Judysan, much success in revision; said syllable was killable.
Excellent haiku!

[Ben Taylor]

The first line has six syllables :p
But the image is beautiful :)
Again, well done.
Your Haiku is the bomb :)

[Angela]

very visual. love it!

[Joel M Frye]

A leap toward life;
silver flash breaches rapids to
renewal upstream.

Well-captured, and thank you for the inspiration, Judy. :)

[Lily Mae]

I love this Judy...xx

[Tommy]

Will it bite my hook?
Tipped with a wiggling plump worm;
This fisherman's dream!

A little Senryu to go with this fantastic Haiku...

Great Write Judy!
RLG,
Tommy

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I adore Haiku poetry.