The Wind

Violently swaying
Limbs, whipping their leaves about
like berserker bats.

Reviews

[Ben Taylor]

this is one of my favorites from you :) Berserker bats is such a cool description :)

[Lily Mae]

I love it Judy:) You've described the weather and my emotions well lol..;)x

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Wow! this to me describes the weather i experienced yesterday! Even today the wind is blowing, and wipping their leaves about like berserker bats!

[KAREN]

Great imagery, I can feel the wind whipping through my hair!