Tempted

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Tempted by warm words,
                  and warmer eyes.

Tempted by sweet caresses
                  and sweeter iies.

Tempted to stray from
                  the straight and narrow.

Tempted to fly away
                 like a sparrow.

Tempted to say what is
                  in the heart and mind

Tempted to play, hide
                 seek and hoping to find.

Always tempted,
                  so futile to resist...

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

How the hell did I miss this intriguing little number?
Aside from the fact that it's lyrical and just plain pretty, I find it quite stimulating that you are "always tempted" and find it "so futile to resist."
A hound's dream-girl.
But, of course, you're really just a sweetheart of a poet--with a bit of a naughty mind.
Impressive work, Judy.

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Hey being tempted is not such a bad thing im often tempted but never tempted to be normal cause how the hell could i ever be that dam fine and fast write Judy cheers and stay crazy Gonzo

[Myenigma]

"Tempted to say what is
in the heart and mind"
hehe me too, i like this!

[Richielee]

nicely rhymed, if i were a bird i'd like to be a crow :)

[Lily Mae]

Excellent Judy, ah to be a sparrow ;) xx