"Broken"

painful soul hurt by others

you bash me with your words

I try to brush it away

your evil words sink in and make me hesitate 

I start to believe in the negativity you speak

you get under my skin making me hate my own flesh

 I cry wanting to disappear

you brought all my flaws out of me for me to see real clear

I start to agree with the enemy

I now see myself how u see me

broken & bare with no repair

how stupid was I, I let u get the best of me

you got what u wanted, a sad little girl

you brought out the worst in me

I give up, you won/now I'm nothing but regrets & tears.

Author's Note

What you think ?

Reviews

[Steve]

You are a good writer. This setup is good. This could be a song?

[Soul Poetic]

yea i sometimes sing in my head while writing poems

[Steve]

yep....you definitely seem like a song writer. Your writing seems to be lyrical.