Eternal Flame

 

Eyes glistening from the warmth of his heart as I gently lay down to sleep,

 

Laughter erasing the ghosts of emptiness in a hope to make me complete.

 

Hand in hand he guides me through corridors of the unknown,

 

And together our inner strength and eternal flame glows.

 

Reviews

[JRB]

short but sweet, nice work
Jan/uisiom

[Bubo]

What a lovely romantic piece!
The promise of love and safety, being guided by a loved one......flows beautiful with lovely images!

[Tina Kline]

This is short but says a lot. It creates a very
pretty picture in my mind of a loving caring
realtionship. It is a very moving and loving poem.

Tina