Never fading

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Im sitting here
counting the days you've been gone
Everyday and every night i try to teach myself what is right
Im all alone here on my own
Remembering the days we've shared
time passed by so fast
still hearing your voice still feeling the same
feeling your loving touch, still feeling your lips against mine
but everyday the memories we shared
slowly start to fade
As fast as that happens something brings me back
the thought of all the words of love we used to say
brings me back to you every time that you seem to fade away

Author's Note

NO GRAMMAR!!!!!!!!!!! just want ur opinion

Reviews

[ShaneBerry]

oh crap! im sorry!!!!!!!!!!! i meant to say, i wish you'd do more babygirl!!! i haven't gotten much sleep today....

but i know, i dont have to ask do i sweetheart? lol jkjkjkjjk! or am i? lol jk..or. hahahahahahahahaha

[Julia]

omg shane!!!!!!!!!! u forgot 2 put sum words!!!

[ShaneBerry]

i remember this one too lol, i love your poetry soooo much kit kit, i wish youd do me babygirl lol

[deeps]

I like this, i can really feel your emotions

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Another Wonderfully written piece filled with emotion!!! :)