The Lightest Touch

"good morning"

photograph compliments of myopera

 

 

~~~

The lightest touch

 awakens the breaking dawn

 

ruffling the curtains of my imagination

opening the windows of my soul

to all that’s new

 

and I am a peach bloom rising

on a pastel breeze through painted skies

dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings

and sunshine smiles

 

awaken day

awaken me...

 

with poetry

~~~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry.
"and I am a peach bloom rising
on a pastel breeze through painted skies
dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings
and sunshine smiles"
The words took me to positive and beautiful thoughts and locations. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Good Morning! Thank you for you wonderful review of my poem! :) Julie

[TL Boehm]

awaken me with poetry - so much better than being awakened to the bellowing blue tick hound next door. Love the use of color in this one. You do that frequently and every time it is so impressive.

[MsJewel]

Thank you - Actually I woke this morning to a furious seagull -- angry because he couldn't get in the window...but oh well...it wouldn't have made a pretty poem. LOL :) Julie

[Mark Heathcote]

Beautiful reflections of a poetess, finding her muse in the midst of dawn… :)

[MsJewel]

Thanks again Mark. I appreciate your lovely comments on my poetry :) Julie

[MikeV]

That was beautiful! I loved the flow, i loved the words
I loved the emotions it brought forth
this was just amazing :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Mike. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :) Julie

[Frieda P]

This is dainty and blissful Julie, I love poetry about poetry, just luverly my friend :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Frieda. I appreciate your lovely comment. :) Julie

[Trace]

What a lovely new poem. Fresh, bright, full of life and nature. like a new page.
This is the poetry I love from your wonderful pen. Almost like a trademark MsJewel piece.
nice way to start a beautiful Sunday morning.

Love it. Trace

[MsJewel]

Good ny sweet friend. I hope I left you with a smile today! :) Julie

[Eva Rosehill]

Wow, beautiful imagery and metaphors. I enjoyed this poem, I will certainly read more.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Eva. It's nice to meet you. I look forward to reading your poetry. :) Julie