All That is Love

a collaboration with Trace

art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

               

In the whisper of twilight

the sweetest passage of a song

slips into dreams

I run to you

gathered to your heart

 

all that is me

 

 

I float upon the strain

beating in soft repeat

a melody to my ear

peace to my soul

forever a part of me

 

all that is you

 

 

Embraced in the harmony

a melody that sings to us

that reverberates between our hearts

the beat of two souls

a serenade of

 

all that is love

 

Author's Note

a collaboration with Trace

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Great collaboration...the lines and stanzas are really quite seamless, and that is not easy to do when writing with someone else. Your styles match up quite well. Love the imagery and the soft, almost elegantly ethereal feel of this one. I can close my eyes and image the words, which create images, which take me to places...I think your hit the mark with this one. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very sweet comment Sarah. Trace and I have been writing together for a few years. I know he will be thrilled to read your review. :) Julie

[Joyce S. Greene]

Kudo's to the two of you. Your words were obviously meant for one another, and, hopefully, you two poets will write many more lovely poems together .

[MsJewel]

Thank you Joyce. Trace is wonderful to write with. I'm so glad you enjoyed our poem. :) Julie

[wordman]

it is a beautiful love poem Julie the graphics blended with the poem to complete it
great job Ron

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Glorious love poem. The two of you were meant to write together, Julie and Trace! Divine romance and spectacular images. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Captivating, I was taken with the image right off, your poetry sings a lovely serenade sweet harmony between lovers. Great collaboration!!

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Frieda! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was all mine, really enjoyed this one. :-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

well it worked....I LOVE these collaborations...may there be many

[MsJewel]

Thanks Doc. Trace and I have been writing together for a few years - I'll post more as I find them - :) Julie

[wordwarrior]

Love those 3 separate lines that become one at the finish. Youn and Trace have some good writing going on between you. This is just beautiful.
Bravo to you both!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[adreamer]

Beautiful emotions they are expressed so beautifully I love the image that was use in this one it fit so beautifully with this one enjoy reading it. You two work so beautifully together one mind one heart one soul. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie