The Wind

a little short and sweet love scribble

          photograph by Aleksey Marina

 

 

       He is the wind

 

                           The warmth rising deep within

                                              stirring my soul

 

                        branches sway

                                          leaves rustle

                                                         butterflies flutter

 

                        flowers invade my heart

 

                              blooming

                                           in the sweetest whispers

 

           I am a poem dancing only for him

 

                                 Yes,

                                        he is the wind

 

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Wow! You know, wind is once my muse in my poetry...so this one got my attention from your page.

You have made a different take on the wind here. It embraces you...makes you dance...and makes everything around you beautiful. Truly that when you love someone, everything becomes beautiful.

Wonderful piece. I like the structure and the word flow.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Have a lovely evening :) Julie

[Jack...]

And the dance is so heavenly my sweet romantic friend. It is your heart Julie that we all strive to feel. Very beautiful and wispy this morning.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jack. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful morning! :) Julie

[Rebecca Buller]

A very "sweet love scribble," my friend. Is there anything sweeter than a love poem? (Hmm, maybe butterscotch pie.) Well done:) :)

[MsJewel]

Yum....butterscotch pie! Now that sounds sweet! Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving a wonderful comment :) Julie

[OTownPete]

Tender and gentle is the wind that keeps your sweet words blowing in our ears Ms. Julie. Your friend in words, Pete

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment Pete. I appreciate you!! :) Julie

[Dr. Wood ?]

once again clever lines masked with beauty

[MsJewel]

Thanks Doc! :) Julie

[Pryde Foltz]

A visual and verbal treat. I mean your words on the page, of course ;)

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Pryde! :) Julie

[B-poet]

A lovely & elegant photo backed by a riveting poem. Great work Julie. A sensual & romantic read. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend! :) Julie