Winter

a romantic fantasy

art ~ winter goddess by Charlene maguire

 

 

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Gather cool winds around her

and shake her silken hair

weaving the beams of moonlight

and he shall feel her there

 

Falling in mists and shadows

haunting the darkest night

twirling with grace she whispers

melodies soft and light

 

Filling the sky above him

with pale white innocence

and he can feel her spirit

drifting with elegance

 

Drawing him in the blanket

that sweeps her ivory bed

wrapping his heart in splendor

into her dreams he’s led

 

“Dance my love, just snowflakes

in this white wonderland

Float with me on fantasies

come love, take my hand”

 

Dressing his eyes with beauty

 shimmers of diamond glow

crown her head with lilies

yet in the night below…

 

The roses chill and wither

at her touch, icy cold

If he could make just one wish

If he could be so bold

 

To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime 

and still....to feel her there

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Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime

and still....to feel her there

lovely lines. ! hugs !
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[MsJewel]

Thank you Anand. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs, Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

Trees sway me into the lullaby of your dreamy words. Oh! The majesty of your thought!

regards,
al

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... We live in a snowy mist...
dreaming of Spring and the touch of
love's awakening... Your poetry conveys
the chill of Winter and the hope of Spring.
truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

Time moves so fast, it is kind of a shame to wish for it to move even faster..but I can't help wishing for spring and seabirds and sunlight dancing on the tide in the morning....
thank you for supporting my poetry. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas. Happy New Year to you and your familly Pat! Hugs, Julie

[Al R. Arce]

This one was really cool! No pun intended!

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Saddam]

I have just little word to say... beautiful poetry and beautiful write by beautiful person.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you. :) Julie

[Solilokiss]

I could feel and see this winters night you write of. Exceptional!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one - it is one of my favorites. Have a beautiful weekend :) Julie

[Lucifer Jones]

A classic. Truly. This is crafted in the age of Byron and tells tales far sweeter. Wow... I'm stuck here smiling. A beautiful portrait you paint of passion and love... dreams and need. Longing for the moment to continue. Simply exquisite. I loved it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day :) Julie

[Banana split !]

Clever rimes and very moving

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Banana split !]

your welcome

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your words are so vivid julie i almost feel the chill.Beautifully written as usual :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you so much! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Kimberley Reid]

This is a brillian piece, eacho line carries so easily from the last. Amazing description as well, loved it!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment. I'm looking forward to reading your poetry :) Julie