Bubbles, Bubbles....

~ impatiently waiting ~

 

 

Reflections appear a little bit misty

in a half filled champagne glass

 

sweet on my lips

             but not quite clear

as tiny bubbles tease my reality

 

Still…

my foot is tapping impatiently

as the silver ball waits in the sky

             to hear the well intentioned

but never really quite achieved resolution

tickling my senses

                 yet growing flatter

        as the tomorrow’s trickle away

                       (kind of like these bubbles)

 

The silver ball is waiting…

 

       Happy New Year

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I've had this in my RR list since New Years and I've finally had the opportunity to leave a review. I had tears in my eyes reading this...this piece just struck a chord with me. The voice and personality of this poem doesn't get a whole lot of attention...but mine is here in spades. Awesome work Julie, it's going in my library :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very sweet comment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Happy New Year! :) Julie

[Gleb Zavlanov]

I always love the tension with the last few second before the clock strikes 12:00 and a new year begins. There is so much excitement, and I believe you have captured it well. Thank you for the write, and a Happy New Year to you too. :)

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Gleb. Happy New Year! :) Julie

[Saddam]

It is quite clear that bubbles is reflection of our image. Thanks...
HAPPY NEW YEAR....dear friend.

[MsJewel]

Happy New Year my sweet friend. I hope it was wonderful. Hugs, Julie

[Saddam]

Absolutely .... Thanks dear...

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Julie and Happy New Year to you.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Pryde :) Julie

[Rita L. Sev]

Love the images this brings. Happy New Year, Julie!

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Happy New Year Rita Hugs, Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Happy new year Jewel. Great poem

[MsJewel]

Thank you BR. I hope yours was wonderful Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

Time seems to slip away faster and faster with every ball drop, but the memories that we create every year make every minute worth living.

Love this poem and the meanings within.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sweetie. I hope your New Year holiday was wonderful. All my love to you and your family and hopes for the best year to come! Hugs, Julie

[redzone]

Yes Julie, Happy New Year!!! I know, not much of a "review", but well, I got an early start on the Bubbly and hic, er... is it midnight yet??? ;o)
Ok seriously, I wonder where last year went as I too await the new year.. lets work for a year where we act more humanly!! Be Well Julie, ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Happy New Year my friend. All the best! Hugs, Julie

[Frieda P]

Happy New Year to you too Julie....champagne bubbles what could be more festive?! Cheers! :-)

[MsJewel]

Cheers my friend!