Still

~ another little love scribble ~

art ~ Carrie Graber

 

 

 

If time could still…

 

…I think it could

for the day is quite still

nights are even quieter

 

still

being alone

doesn’t mean I’m lonely

 

it just means

I’d prefer to be with you

 

still

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the logic of your words. Many kinds of loneliness. Sometime being alone is needed and sometime we are waiting. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Exactly what I was thinking! :) Julie

[Anita Singh]

The longings of love. Great work! Enjoyed reading this. :)

[MAC]

this is a sad and rather lonely write but also dripping in romantic gestures. gestures that you do so well Julie. another excellent write......

[ferousfinite]

Dude! - - -YES! This is masterfully done. Like frosting on your lips...

[MsJewel]

A sweet comment. Thank you. :) Julie

[Trevor Barnett]

Very simple, but lovely poem like the stillness you describe.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trevor :) Julie

[s y e]

Wooo, girl you are on fire! Sometimes being alone can be the best thing that happens to us. I sometimes think that being alone is what I need... and it's a good way to end the night for me sometimes. Just relaxing.

Loved it.

[MsJewel]

It's the perfect time to write poetry~ :) Julie

[Jack...]

Julie, you should publish a book of your poetry so I would have somethng beautiful to keep me company on those lonely nights. Just make sure there are 365 poems in the book. :)

This is the perfect little poem, filled with just the right amount of affection. I love this poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Some things never change, do they? There is strong romantic longing in every line of this one, Julie. I liked it. Lydi**

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wonderful write... endearing, but also has a subtle strength within your words.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[wordman]

still sounds like the bill Anderson song

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

I need alone time. All writers do. It's hard to be creative when someone is standing behind you demanding "Baby? When are we going?... Baby?...ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME!?!?"

[MsJewel]

Thank you BR :) Julie