Silence

~ a scribble ~

art ~ Elena Dudina ~ Dreamer

 

 

 

When breath is stilled and there is no light

                    save the moon

        peeking about the shadows

as softly as yesterday’s lullaby playing in my heart

 

                 and it is dark

 

As I long for the stars to shiver silver wishes

falling from the sky

to wrap me in the hope of tomorrow

 

                yet it is quiet

 

I will find comfort in the faintest whisper of my pen

fluttering on the wings of butterfly dreams

leaving rose petal kisses

               gently on my pillow

 

Reminding me

                  there is now

          and there is silence

                             but there is still

                                                   poetry

 

 

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

"There is silence but there is still poetry"- the whole message reflected here.Yes we don't need to be put out because life is gloomy still poetry lives in us..giving us a hope for tommorrow. Beautiful picture painted wi5h a deep allegorical meaning.:) touching poem Julie. ★ wishes and love★

~Sophy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words Sophy. Have a beautiful day :) Julie

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wish you the same :)

[cycy]

"Reminding me
there is now
and there is silence
but there is still
poetry"
i love....sorry for late reviews i have been very busy with school but im getting to all the RRs

[MsJewel]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poems. How is school going?
:) Julie

[cycy]

school is alright just hectic as always...never a dull moment hey and you are very welcome my dear fav poet :) :)

[Anand Sehgal]

As I long for the stars to shiver silver wishes

falling from the sky

to wrap me in the hope of tomorrow



yet it is quiet

superb imagery. You are indeed a master story-teller . I am a fan.
Love you Julie :)
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[MsJewel]

Thank you my very sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Blue]

I am captivated, Julie. Your poetry sings.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[stars are far]

thank was well done..
i really enjoyed this :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie

[Tom]

In such a serene, bewitching atmosphere, your pen does indeed create majestic poetry !

Pleasantly, poetically placating, par excellence !

[MsJewel]

Thank you Tom~ :) Julie

[MAC]

loneliness makes for amazing poetry and you always write this type of romantic (tug on the heart strings) poetry so well. another beautiful write Julie

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. I hope all is well with you. hugs, Julie

[Latifa]

mesmerizing poetry dear, it takes you into another world of meditation and pondering thoughts

[MsJewel]

Thanks again for your lovely comment :) Julie

[s y e]

My favourite romantic poetess - Julie, you just pull me in and keep me there, wanting more after I have finished reading you... you simply are amazing...

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[kublakhan27]

Your writing transcends mere scribbles my friend...it reminds me how a night of malaise can be remedied by just one poetic idea...I really need more of those nights haha Lovely work as always :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie