Destiny?

~ a spring love scribble ~

 

art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

 

As if spring were your own…

 

the garden gate opened

and roses appeared

birds sang

              and clouds blushed in pink

                       scented of fresh linen

                                  and pastel painted dawn

 

 I fell into your arms

 

As ribbons of light

       tethered our hearts

                    beating as one

                        in perfect harmony

 

       Was it my destiny?

 

The garden gate opened

            and you found me

                       in springtime

Reviews

[redzone]

aaah Julie, you and your delicately delightful "springtime scribbles".. breath taking.. if I believed in fate and destiny then I would say that they were at play in your poem.. oh yes, very much alive and opening up the gate to your garden... ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[cycy]

you put so much thought and effort in your poetry and the results are definitely visible, both the words and the indescribable feeling are just beautiful :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for supporting my little scribbles. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

Yet another that made me nostalgic. ^-^

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Gleb Zavlanov]

What a beautiful poem, penned with a masterful grasp of grace and beauty. Spring is a lovely season and I feel as if its incorporation in this poem adds a certain magical feeling to it. A 100!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you for your wonderful comment :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Your world seems so pretty through your poetry Jewel. Mine is more like angry at "the man."

[Trevor Barnett]

Can spring get here any quicker! I thoroughly enjoyed your Spring inspired poem!

[stars are far]

wow..this is so "springy" ..amazing ..
*Applause*.. well done

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[stars are far]

my pleasure :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that garden gate has good timing!

beautiful write.

a walk among the blossoms of love.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Jacob :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh....over the top romantic, Julie! Yes, it is meant to be that two people meet....and when they do, the rest is history! Such beautiful imagery and sweet emotion in every line. Super poetry! Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi. Warmer days are right around the corner! Hugs, Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

They have never left me here, Julie. It is 85 and sunny here today! :)

[Trace]

Springtime is so fresh and new
what better time for love to blossom and grow.

Tend the garden and enjoy the rewards.

Beautiful poetry here my friend.
Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweetie Hugs, Julie

[kublakhan27]

You've truly captured the spirit of Spring here my friend...the opening stanza very much reflects how it feels when it finally arrives ;) And when you add romance to the mix, its arrival becomes that much sweeter. You have a style all your own when it comes to your evocations of love in these innocent stages...lovely work as always Julie :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie