Imagination in Flight

art by Pino

 

 

 

Beyond sleepy afternoon naps

cuddled in mama's lap

in the big white wicker chair

 

and further than the breeze ruffling the curtains,

teasing the calla lilies in the garden

 

Above the clouds,

beyond the horizon and further than the sun…fading slowly…

 

Children fly

 

Imaginations soaring on glittery wings

weaving magical dreams with a Tinkerbelle wand

through endless skies

 

Fluttering

 

above enchanted lands and mysterious seas

where captains have hooks and wrongs are made right

in pure innocence

 

and anything’s possible

because children fly….

 

I look in her eyes…and I can fly too

Reviews

[Stephen]

So Sweet. What a beautiful poem. Even what a beautiful heart you`ve got, Julie .. I`ve just read your seductive stuffs, I didn`t know that your so ........... simply so .......... sorry I don`t have any words to praise your beauty so, yeah ..so your simply .............. adorable.

This poem`s very good & even the pic.is revealing the history of beauty indeed. Well penned write, Julie. I`m going to give you 10/10 for this beautiful write ;)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. I write romantic poems, but my favorite poems are written for my sweet daughter. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. :) Julie

[Stephen]

My pleasure, Julie. Well, you know what? I`d just seen your seductive side before reading this piece but yeah, this poem speaking up to me revealing the truth of yous how kind & yeah ..yeah ..sexy you are *Wink* ... Great job, Julie. Once again even i`m always pleased to read your stuffs but this time ..yeah ... i`m much more than pleased reading this write. Stay blessed, Sweety ;)

[s y e]

// Imaginations soaring on glittery wings
weaving magical dreams with a Tinkerbelle wand
through endless skies //

Wow, this just sent me right up on to cloud 9 and touched my heart. This is really beautiful. I am a huge fan of Tinkerbelle... she was one of my favourite characters from Disney. Just wow.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

Very lovely write Miss Julie..
A bit of magic in your thoughts and words.

Scott

[MsJewel]

It's wonderful to see you. Thank you for stopping by with such a lovely comment. Childhood should be magical, don't you think? Hugs, Julie

[Scott Metro]

Yes indeed..the magic is what makes childhood so full of promise.
You are welcome Princess.read moreYes indeed..the magic is what makes childhood so full of promise.
You are welcome Princess.
Scott

[Kyle Lawrence]

100/100, you are a beautiful writer Julie! :)

[MsJewel]

You are too kind. Thank you Kyle :) Julie

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I love the memories you've rekindled in me. I was able to keep a fantasy alive in my youngest son from the age of 3 to 11 years old. He still doesn't know how I did the things I did that kept the fantasy alive.
Children today grow too fast. The fantastic world of mystery and magic is all to soon shattered.
A parents joy for their children isn't often expressed. A beautiful piece of writing.

[MsJewel]

I agree - children do grow up too fast. Some of my best childhood memories were reading with my mother and the time I spent reading to my daughter. Childhood should be magical. It is wonderful that you wanted that for your son. Hugs, Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

A touching poem about the power of loving a child. A wonderful write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Trace]

Innocence of a child..... dreams of a mother.....
I wonder how much you brought with you from your childhood
to share with your own daughter?

And I hope you are able to see your own . In your daughter from you sharing her teachings.

As always..... you are so talented.
I love this special piece.

Trace.

[MsJewel]

As a father, I know you cherish these special times Trace. If only they could last forever....but now my little one is off on her own.... Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

Hope your mothers day was wonderful.

T

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweetie!

[Aethereal]

This beautiful poem is free verse poetry at its best. Here you have a poem within a poem where children seem as butterflies:

Above the clouds
Children fly
Fluttering
in pure innocence

Your outer poem reminds me of Peter Pan guiding children off to Never-never-land. That storybook picture seems to have inspired it all. If I ever write a response song-poem using rhyme and meter that’s as good as this free verse poem, I’ll keep it for myself as a little butterfly gem. Your poem shall flutter about lighting the corridors of my mind ‘til I do.

[MsJewel]

My clever friend ~ you caught my poem within the poem! Childhood fairytales and fantasies are some of my very best memories - reading with my mom and the time I spent reading with my daughter. Thank you for your wonderfully kind comment. :) Julie

[adreamer]

Very beautiful memories they are she will always be a part of your life that will never die, the who have known her will see the beautiful side of her in you Julie. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry! :) Julie

[Chris Micha]

JULIE!!!! You've done it again. You have taken me back to my childhood. My mom was a single mother and she would take each one of us, at separate times, and read us bedtime stories. You brought to tears almost with this beautiful piece. So amazing miss Julie!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this one Christian! Thank you for your wonderful comment! :) Julie

[wordman]

I remember I had a great imagination ,space ships was my thing
a beautiful piece it all complimented each other

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron! :) Julie