300 Love Poems Later...

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ ron discenza

 

 

300 love poems later…

 

my heart still flutters

               not with butterflies

but with an indefinable yearning

a perpetual hunger

that could only be satisfied

with your kiss ~ resting gently upon my lips

 

as soft as a dew kissed dawn

as light as a whisper of breath

                       held

        in the wake of a lacy moon

 

a kiss…your kiss

                        soft, light

yet with the unspoken magic

that defines the word rapture

spilling with passion from the pen

               of a poet…this poet

whose heart still flutters

not with butterflies

 

                   300 love poems later…

 

              

Reviews

[Trace]

It is amazing the journey you have taken
I have so enjoyed all the poetry you have shared along the way.
this has a touch of that trail.... a tale of love.
a poets heart expressed so brilliantly with the stroke of her pen.

The most amazing thing is that each and every poem you have written
is extraordinary in it's own right. (Write???)

I love how this poem isn't really about the 300 previous poems
but about how the love is still there.......
and probably always will be.

This goes to the top of my favorites list.

HUGGS. ...Trace

[MsJewel]

The memory of him will always stay in a very special place in my heart. ..and you, my dear friend, have a special place as well. LY Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie.

[Trace]

I just love your sentimental side.
it brings out your best poetry.
and.... Thank you my dear friend. The feelings are mutual.

[SleeplessVolcano]

The unanswered qeustions are haunting.....did it "start" after 300 love poems? Did it end?

And then the most irrational one of all......Does it really matter?
Love, at its core, is irrational, isn't it? :)

Great poetry!

[SmittyJas]

The twist and turns of love-Passions romance very comforting in the end. Love never ending amen. It all begins with the joining of two sets of lips and a simple kiss. Love is bliss.

[Frieda P]

Love a 'lacy moon'...this flutters by heart so gently Julie...300 and each one a stunner! Brava!

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet. Thank you for supporting my little scribbles :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Can't resist, one is more beautiful than the next...must be that CA air! :)

[Brokensoul]

So consummately passionate are your words

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[MagicAl]

Soft and sensual..beautiful write.. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[David Scott]

300 or three million, the heart will always flutter for the one we love... No amount of poetry will still the fluttering of true love. It feeds the flames.

[MsJewel]

Yes, I believe that to be true as well. :) Julie

[Latifa]

my heart is flutters with your magical words darling......................lovely.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

I could write one called " 300 tirades later." This poem was swell.

[MsJewel]

I'll look for it BR...lol..
Thanks! Julie

[Blue]

Your poetry always shines with excellence, Julie. I enjoy visiting your page 'cause I know there's quality and beauty in your words. Enchanting read!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment :) Julie

[Carl]

its not bad but it's too girly for me

[MsJewel]

Good thing I'm a girl! Thanks so much for stopping by and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie