Until...

~ goodbye isn't always forever ~

art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

Free my hair upon your pillow
in a quiet golden storm
Kiss the teardrops from the clouds
until the rain is warm

and let it fall, soft as a whisper
of silk upon the skin
With each breath keep my embrace

           until we meet again

Dream our dream without an ending
like an unfinished song
Hear the winds echo forever
and know it wont be long
for silver moons to shine once more
on this gentle hurricane
Find my heart your safe harbor

          until we meet again

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

This is stunning! The flow and gentle nature of the words that dance along seamlessly to create this beautiful piece is masterful. It's an effortless read nd one that has captivated me and my imagination of what true love surely is.

Very nice.

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words! :) Julie

[Arundass TP]

Excellent poem. Really enjoyed reading 🙂

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Jewel of Forever... your Poetry is a tapestry of love that knows no bounds... the sounds of Wisteria whispering lovers lament and sighs of hearts entwined in blossoms well spent. tenderly, Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Pat. Hugs, Julie

[andrew mitchell]

Splendid harmonious write ms jewel.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Andrew :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

You are welcome hope all is going well!

[ROXANE DORSEY]

To be on my love's pillow, I adore this poem. thanks for sharing your talent.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... "Silver moons to shine once more
upon this gentle hurricane".
You are the bright and shining star of
romantic harmony in bursts of
eternal bliss... truly, Pat

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A beautiful love refrain!

[MsJewel]

Thank you John :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Fantastic writing again, the longing to meet again, sad but also something
so beautiful and uplifting to look forward to, you are a. Word wizard for sure,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[pvpd sri harsha]

very painful madam
than the "streams"
why you always
only show emotional streams

the pain is pain
why you express again and again
with much more pain
than i can understand

it is not much
of my life
even though
i never expresss
this dept of pain.

of course
as i remember many times
i too mention the same
still..... ...lll...

i am happy now
once i was not

of course....


keep smiling
until we meet again...


p.v.p.d. sri harsha....

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a beautiful write , I loved reading it.

Kaze~ :-)

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you Kaze :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, Julie, it was my pleasure. :-)

[WritersRankings]

This poem has a flawless execution and is so very sweet. I'd love to read more of your work. It's gentle to the core and very likable artwork.

It's wonderful to sometimes ready poetry that is just easy and kind.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie