So it Rains

~ a scribble ~

~ photograph compliments of wordpress ~

 

 

~~~

Alone with the moonlight, is it a dream

that plays in soft repeat where I remain

waiting for rainbow days and yet it seems

the clouds have turned to gray and so it rains

 

And as the wind begins to rise and shake

the heavens weep and cry in wild refrain

Caught in this reverie is where the ache

breathes with inflections of a hurricane

 

 I shiver in the cold, though passions warm

in memories of you, etched and ingrained

with each tender tear that gently forms

to fill my heart, my eyes...left unexplained

 

The sun, it seems to rise, as golden rays

will weave my rainbow wishes once again

through clear blue skies that never seem to stay

when teardrops fall in dreams and so it rains

~~~

Reviews

[Stephen]

~~~ I think, you looking more beautiful when you “Scribbling” .. don`t ya? *Wink* ~~~

I like how you blend the beauty of some moon lights with the delicious taste of your love finding the paths ~~~ the unnamed roads~~~ walking over the ridges of some hearts all the time. It`s a spiritual write which conveying the message to be loved ~~~ around this wicked world ~~~ making it pure again as it was. Your glamour, the beauty, the love & your restrained beats shined up with the talent of yous through this marvelous write. All lines, all verses are beautifully expressed with/in your intoxicated muse and that`s all what I love about you & your stuffs. It`s always a great pleasure to loosen up my sexy foots over your pages. Great job, Julie. I adore this excellent poem!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

To be able to express an undying love in so many different ways is truly a gift. each poem is written with passion and dedication to a lost love. Sometimes I want to hug you just to say don't be sad.
Another great write.

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet. I'm not sad anymore...not all the time anyway.. These are just little heartprints of a time in my life when I lost that special someone. I'm surrounded by love. Your kind words mean the world to me. Hugs, Julie

[Missiannelli]

Wow! Touching poem. Keep up the great work!

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Bob the Unicorn]

Good stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

these words entwine all the feelings of happiness and sorrow.
Such a powerful piece that i enjoyed reading thoroughly

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words Troy :) Julie

[Sasha]

" I shiver in the cold, though passions warm
in memories of you, etched and ingrained
with each tender tear that gently forms
to fill my heart, my eyes...left unexplained"

OMG AMAZING!!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment Sasha :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

OhmyGod! Miss Jewel- you're basically writing versions of the same state again and again but each time very differently and sufficiently discussed! It's always renewed and recrafted from scratch- each time, through new techniques of exposing art to the public
.... Bravo! Love all the poems I've read till date.....😍

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoy my little heartprints. Thank you for your kind words. :) Julie

[Papatunde]

Stunning display. Great use of words. II loved the first few lines simply because it lulls you into the poem and it creates this magnificent atmosphere and image.well done

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you :) Julie

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Breathtaking in its sorrow, the delicate way you weave your lovely words, makes one float on the tears shed here. Yet there is that glimmer of sun and hope, wistful wants and dreams of happiness without the pain of memories past. Absolutely beautiful poem, loved every well written line.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie

[Madalyn Beck]

This is beautiful. The detail you've put into this write made me feel as if I was in the cold rain. It also had a soothing tone and left a sort of calm in the air.

Wonderfully penned Jules!! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Maddie! :) Julie

[s y e]

// Caught in this reverie is where the ache
breathes with inflections of a hurricane //

Sigh.. Julie, you are simply marvellous and so very talented. Your scribbles are so powerful and amazing. This is beautiful!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words!! Hugs, Julie