I Thought I Knew True Love...

 

 

 

I Thought I Knew True Love

 

…and then she cried

sweet little raindrops from blue bell eyes

 

I held her

close

where she could hear the lullaby

playing in my heart

only for her

 

 

tears fell…

my heart fluttered

 

and her tiny hand wrapped around my finger

 

No,

I never knew true love

 

….and then she cried

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

The first moment of private true closeness with a new born is one that last a life time. No one who hasn't experienced it can fully understand. i loved the lines
" I held her
close
where she could hear the lullaby
playing in my heart
only for her"
Only a mother knows. You surpassed yourself , didn't think you could get better, but you did.

[MsJewel]

Your lovely words humble me my friend. Thank you :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a beautiful poem, it's so sweet and cute. I loved reading this amazing piece. Nicely penned my friend.

Kaze~ :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[adreamer]

A very beautiful bonding between a Mother and Child a bonding only a Mother knows. I believe this is another one of your beautiful poems from that other site.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry. :) Julie

[redzone]

Aaaah Julie... and then you did!!! And that's all it takes, that cry and tiny fingers wrapped around yours... hooked utterly and completely.
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

forever and ever...:) Julie

[wordman]

this will melt the heart every time,wonderful job julie

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie