Pink

~ a little scribble ~

 ~~~

The gentle blush that fills a room

soft as the lightest kiss

of innocence; a flowers bloom

sweet lips of tenderness

smooth as satin though tiny bites

a nibble or a quiver

of ecstasy always invites

a tingle or a shiver

on silky skin...the pastel hue

will make a lover think

"How lovely is the taste of you

when all dressed up in pink”

~~~

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh wow, just the right blend of sweetness and sexuness to set the heart and libido on fire.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Cowboy! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always my pleasure Julie :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Very sexy as usual. Should flowers have a possessive apostrophe?

[MsJewel]

Yes, it should - thanks so much for catching that! :) Julie

[Cory Barrett]

its my favorite color. my favorite crayon

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮You may have just made me consider liking the color pink, haha. Lovely work! ^-^ ╰☆╮

[MsJewel]

Thank you Brittany. :) Julie

[Persona]

Beautifully put. Definitely one of the top romance poems I've read in a while. Maybe a little too superficial though.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[wordman]

a lovely passionate write about pink and the softness it brings
blonde hair pink lips what more could you need

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Ron. :) Julie

[Saddam]

You are just awesome in this pink colour. And of_course make me pink too.

"How lovely is the taste of you"

[MsJewel]

I'm sure you are lovely in pink as well my sweet friend! :) Julie

[onceloved]

Very beautiful scribble poem you have there and it was beautifully written too, it is more than just a pink poem to both of you to know and SHARE.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Remy! :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

color me love!

[MsJewel]

I might just use that line for another poem! Thank you Jacob! :) Julie