Moments

~ a love scribble ~

 

Mark Arian Art

 

 

 

~~~

Quiet as a whisper

softly as can be

As dim as a shadow

sweeps a memory

 

When it's least expected

though faded and unclear

a feeling so divine

tells me you are near

 

For a precious moment

if only for a while

the comfort you bring

leaves me with a smile...

 

~~~

 

 

Reviews

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

i learnt something from the poems theme......... wen u r siting alone u r confronted by a soft sweet memory........wich u hav never expected that it would come at that very time...............though that memory is a bt blurr but it fills u with a sense of happiness and a smile on ur face.......... nice nice....... n cool use of words.........

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this one. Thanks so much for your kind comment :) Julie

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

That all depicts a nice creation miss

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This warms my heart, Julie...

You paint memories in the softest colours...love should always feel this way.

Beautifully penned!~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even if "it is only for awhile"
it's worth it, just to have that feeling.

[MsJewel]

I agree Jacob. Thank you :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

in love with love i am :) blissful mood created; i breath a sigh
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[stars are far]

That was very well done, i enjoyed this

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[wordman]

two souls searching in the night

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

Spiritual connection between two spirits can be incredible! Lovely poem :)♥

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

This is your genre, where you shine. A warm, romantic, and loving piece.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for supporting my scribbles. I appreciate you :) Julie