Moments

~ a love scribble ~

 

Mark Arian Art

 

 

 

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Quiet as a whisper

softly as can be

As dim as a shadow

sweeps a memory

 

When it's least expected

though faded and unclear

a feeling so divine

tells me you are near

 

For a precious moment

if only for a while

the comfort you bring

leaves me with a smile...

 

~~~

 

 

Reviews

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

i learnt something from the poems theme......... wen u r siting alone u r confronted by a soft sweet memory........wich u hav never expected that it would come at that very time...............though that memory is a bt blurr but it fills u with a sense of happiness and a smile on ur face.......... nice nice....... n cool use of words.........

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this one. Thanks so much for your kind comment :) Julie

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

That all depicts a nice creation miss

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very sweet and fun little poem, it rolls off the tongue and warms the heart.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it sweet cowboy! :) julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

:))))))))))

[B-poet]

An eloquent romantic masterpiece. Great work Julie. A lovely heartwarming & fine write. Loved the picture that went along with your poem as well. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. I love Mark Arian's paintings..they are so unique. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the poem :) Julie