The Waterfall

a collaboration with trace

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

On silken skin, soft as dew

in loves embrace, just we two

float in heaven's smooth cascade

upon the fantasy we made

 

sway with me

play with me

stay with me

 

‘til my thirst is quenched at last

and your heart is beating fast

and your breath is swept away

in the velvet waters spray

 

scheme with  me

dream with me

scream with me

 

as the water turns to mist

in the wake of your warm kiss

and reality seems to fade

as all the dreams we’ve made…

 

tumble as we recall

the pleasure of it all

Loving in the Waterfall

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Not much that I can say that hasn't already been said by the other...water is a beautiful thing, and I don't know why, but water and romance just seem to feed off of each other...water is my ruling element (yes, I do pay some attention to astrology haha) so maybe I'm more sensitive to it than others, but the passion of this piece practically came at me in 3-D...you two never fail to make beautiful music together...another great one :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[AprilRN1210]

wahooooo! makes me want to go steam up a spray of water in my own playtime.... heck yes...
"scheme with me. dream with me, scream with me.".... I WANT!!!! wheeew... very hot, sensual, and just the right amount of romance.... love when you two get together... always a little magic.... love this!!!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet April! Hugs, Julie

[Saddam]

A well and beautiful collab... I really amazed and astonished, How you put it so well and touchable. Enjoy it with my all heart.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. It's wonderful to see you! :) Julie

[B.J]

You are a brilliant writer and poet along with your friend. This is steep in personl touches

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous comment :) Julie

[wordman]

another beautiful write loved it all couldn`t tell where it started or stopped

ps gone from starlite

[MsJewel]

You are better off here Ron - with real poets. Hugs, Julie

[Sami Khalil]

This is cascading indeed with passion and dreamy mists. In the wake of all, we shower with the magic of love. Excellent...:).........

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).......

[onceloved]

You two are master artist when it comes to writing very beautiful poetry together. They are always so beautifully written from deep within the two of you, think you for sharing your beautiful gift with us. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are welcome my friend. :) Larry

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the three stanzas with the three lines and repetition of the sound...

really works so well here...love is a waterfall...could be dangerous, but oh so fun if we fall with it acceptingly...

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) julie

[Matching Socks]

Wow, love this!
I love the word scream in this context and all that it conjures.
Nicely done, dream team.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

My pleasure Julie, any time. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Very sexy, sensual, and romantic. I definitely think you missed the Mature tag on this one. It is steamy, like a good hot shower. I think you missed the apostrophes in love's embrace and water's spray.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie