Season in the Sun

~ a love scribble ~

                 art ~ Irene Sheri

 

 

             Like his kiss upon my cheek

or a season in the sun

of the summer of the joys

and the essence of the one

 

With the glory of the dawn

and the beauty of the light

gracefully when intertwined

a sunrise when in my sight

 

More lovely than angel’s art

or a bird upon the bough

with a song that floats and fades

in twilights tender fall

 

Where the moon and stars above

when compared will dim in shame

to the flame of sweet desire

at a whisper of his name

 

Slipping softly into dreams

waking me with fantasy

To just believe fills my heart

with a love that’s come to be

 

Like a season in the sun

finding me when I am weak

warming me with tenderness

like his kiss upon my cheek

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Soft and warm romance throughout this one, Julie. You know I love Irene Sheri's artwork and it complements your poetry so well. "Slipping softly into dreams waking me with fantasy" ahhh....such a lovely line! Great romantic poetry, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Your comments are always so encouraging Lydi. Thank you. Hugs, Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Sweet and romantic.
Beautiful.
I loved it!
:)

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Thank you :) Julie

[stars are far]

wow.. that was very beautiful and romantic.. well done ;)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Hitchhiker]

Ahhh . . . I doubt that he forgot to put his lips on the nape of your neck, also. Loved how you kept the first line to this poem and ended with the same. Interesting thought.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[B.J]

Such beautiful artwork in charismatic words.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Barb :) Julie

[B.J]

you're welcome

[Fran Marie]

soft.. beautiful and oh so romantic....nicely penned

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem Fran. Thank you :) Julie

[Frieda P]

It's soft and dewy as a tender kiss...you always capture the moment so eloquently my friend. I'm not crazy about the red, only because this poem is so elegant, and the red is rather jarring, I know red stands for 'love' :) I still love it to pieces.

[MsJewel]

I was a little iffy on the red as well Frieda...maybe I'll pick another color. Thanks so much for you kind, encouraging words lovely lady! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

The sentiment comes across beautifully, I actually love red...I can live with it. :)

[onceloved]

Love always has a way to open ones heart to know it again, you penned your feeling so beautifully in this one Julie. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are Welcome Julie. :) A.F.

[wordman]

sounds like a beautiful life

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[KAREN]

Beautifully done! It's such a romantic poem, and I love the flow of each stanza.

[MsJewel]

I appreciate your generous comment. Thank you :) Julie

[KAREN]

My pleasure!

[TL Boehm]

Such a beautiful poem. I enjoyed the way it came back to itself in the last verse. I think that second verse is perhaps my favorite but the whole thing is wonderful.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie