For Autumn and For Always

~ a collaboration by Trace and MsJewel ~

 

fall drizzle ~ artist unknown

 

 

 

When the sun won't shine
like I want it to
and my thoughts bleed shades of grey
I will lean on you

 
When your heart is sad and heavy
and cold winds seem to call
When you need arms to hold you

I’ll catch you should you fall

 

 

         

It is Autumn

the air filled with pumpkin scents

and golden hues

 

Change stirs the breeze, ruffling the leaves

once lush and green,

dressing the trees in tiny flames

f

    a

        l

            l

                i

                                    n

                        g

                              like rain

 in crimson red and brilliant orange

 

                                Still,

                 it’s a winsome breeze

perhaps it doesn’t know

                                 it’s almost winter….

 

When the leaves have fallen

and the breeze shivers through lonely branches,

I’ll find shelter in your arms

Knowing....

                                     I can lean on you

                                                                 you would never let me fall

     

 

 

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

I must say i was busy crossing this misty road when i found this golden ray of yours. Sucha lovely poem. The symbolism of seasons as dark and bright times of life is awesome. Your collab is too good.writing style of you both merges into one giving a really different and refreshing taste.Awe strucl by the brilliant images here. Love and wishes to you both ;)

~ Sophy

[Trace]

Thank you for your excellent comments on our collaboration.
Trace

[R Smith]

That's a beautiful poem of Autumn and the love and longing to be nestled in the arms of a loved one, perfect writing, thank you :)

[Trace]

Thank you so much for your excellent comments.
Trace

[Trace]

I absolutely love the presentation you have created for our new poem.
It brings out the beauty in the words and makes it float like the falling leaves.

It is so good to write with you, and this poem confirms why we do it.
It is what we do best.

Thank you my dearest friend,
It is so good to be back.

Trace

[Woody]

fabulous collab. everything is perfect. the picture, the wording, the colours and the layout.
what a combination!

[Trace]

Thank you Woody for your wonderful comments and compliments on our poem.

Trace

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love you use of autumn as a syblolism for loves many aspects. Well done as always dear Julie.

[Trace]

Thank you so much, I am glad you liked our collaboration.
Trace

[Sami Khalil]

Amazing collaboration between two talented and inspirational writers. You both make the world a better place to live midst all the crazy things. Where there is love, there is shelter in its arms. Excellent...:).........

[Trace]

Thank you my friend for your excellent and delightful comments and compliments on our poetry.

Trace

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................