On Gossamer Wing

~ scribbles and heartprints ~

                elena dudina ~ mariposa

 

 

 

When night falls cool

and the moon is pale

and there is no sound,  save the stars

dancing to the beat of my heart

I can feel him….

 

as soft as the stardust that sweeps my pillow

mending the roses

with tender hands and a gentle heart

wrapping me a cocoon of silky nights

and pastel painted tomorrows

 

fly butterfly

love is alive

…on gossamer wing

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

what a fine way to put ones self to sleep in sweet dreams ... i am going to try and remember this tonight just before i fall asleep .. and see if it affects my dreams the way i dream it might ;) another beautiful love poem .. delicate and with your special brand of music to it
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. Sweet dreams my sweet friend :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

i did remember to think of this poem .. and honestly .. the results were a little scandalous .. i think i went back to my 16 .. :)) really!
E.

[Avinash]

The words here have a kind floating effect. The softness and care is everywhere in this poem of love.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[R Smith]

its so beautiful i put it straight into my library, thank you Julie, Happy new year to you and your family :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Happy New Year Richard :) Julie

[Richard Layne]

This makes me smile, especially the cocoon of silky nights and pastel painted tomorrows. Very bright-very optimistic- very nice.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Richard :) Julie

[B-poet]

This is well deserving for publication. Vivid and gentle eloquence at its best. Great work Julie. An exceptional write & read. :)

[MsJewel]

Wow...thanks so much. This means the world to me coming from someone who I admire so very much. :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of Gary Wright...and his songs "dream weaver" and "love is alive"

like a combination of...

those soft gossamer wings. the gentle heart---

there is always a soft beauty to your phrasing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Jacob :) Julie

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love the soft, beautiful, meditative tone to this one. Delicate imagery..."as soft as the stardust that sweeps my pillow, mending the roses..." Exquisitely beautiful...

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment. :) Julie

[Bright Ocean Star]

you are welcome...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Now you KNOW I love any poem that mentions butterflies! I can almost feel the silkiness of the nights.....heavy sigh! It is difficult for me to say something new about your love poems. The romance is in a class by itself, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[Zahra]

wow, what a beautiful imagery. well penned, soothing write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Ruth]

I read your poetry and then re-read...each line gives me pause...truly does, swims within me and brings forth a sigh, just wow xo

[MsJewel]

You are so kind Poppy. Thank you :) Julie

[Ana B.]

This poem evokes beautiful emotions, a great job!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ana :) Julie