On Gossamer Wing

~ scribbles and heartprints ~

                elena dudina ~ mariposa

 

 

 

When night falls cool

and the moon is pale

and there is no sound,  save the stars

dancing to the beat of my heart

I can feel him….

 

as soft as the stardust that sweeps my pillow

mending the roses

with tender hands and a gentle heart

wrapping me a cocoon of silky nights

and pastel painted tomorrows

 

fly butterfly

love is alive

…on gossamer wing

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

what a fine way to put ones self to sleep in sweet dreams ... i am going to try and remember this tonight just before i fall asleep .. and see if it affects my dreams the way i dream it might ;) another beautiful love poem .. delicate and with your special brand of music to it
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. Sweet dreams my sweet friend :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

i did remember to think of this poem .. and honestly .. the results were a little scandalous .. i think i went back to my 16 .. :)) really!
E.

[Trace]

Absolutely amazing poem.

Very soft and subtle sensuality
Full of beautiful imagery and soothing verse.

Simply lovely.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment sweet beast. :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Beautiful exquisite!!!
Loved the emotions and romance.
Your imageries are always brilliant.
I loved it!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for supporting my little scribbles. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[GiuseppesHeart]

Your poetry is unique, this is as "close to the language" as it gets...
I'm never disappointed visiting your page,always moved from middle c.
100/100,

R

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment :) Julie

[C. Lee Battaglia]

It's such lovely, peaceful, poem! It touched me very deeply.
Keep up the great work!

C. Lee Battaglia

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you :) Julie

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Keep up the great work!
Your welcome!

[Moonie]

This reads like a gentle lullaby. A very soft and soothing write! :)) Well done, ma'am! :)
 

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Saddam]

It is many time since I see your any poem, but you always force me to think over what I am thinking and writing. Your writing is very powerful for make anyone crazy. It is my own thought and Now I got one. Great as always dear friend.
Your poems drag me in a imaginary world where white flowers imposing me. Beautiful write dear. Happy New Year dear.

[MsJewel]

Happy New Year my dear friend. :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story in the amazing poem. The gentle description led the reader to a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry dear Poet.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Happy New Year to you and your family :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[MomzillaNC]

Lovely… "fly butterfly; love is alive; …on gossamer wing"

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

yw 👏