On Gossamer Wing

~ scribbles and heartprints ~

                elena dudina ~ mariposa

 

 

 

When night falls cool

and the moon is pale

and there is no sound,  save the stars

dancing to the beat of my heart

I can feel him….

 

as soft as the stardust that sweeps my pillow

mending the roses

with tender hands and a gentle heart

wrapping me a cocoon of silky nights

and pastel painted tomorrows

 

fly butterfly

love is alive

…on gossamer wing

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

what a fine way to put ones self to sleep in sweet dreams ... i am going to try and remember this tonight just before i fall asleep .. and see if it affects my dreams the way i dream it might ;) another beautiful love poem .. delicate and with your special brand of music to it
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. Sweet dreams my sweet friend :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

i did remember to think of this poem .. and honestly .. the results were a little scandalous .. i think i went back to my 16 .. :)) really!
E.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Jewel, you can really woo the coldest of hearts!

[MsJewel]

What a lovely compliment. Thank you Alfred :) Julle

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

As always, very beautiful, Julie, I love the pastel painted tomorrows and the stardust that sweeps my pillow, loved it once again. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi :) Julie

[ANTO]

Julie this floats around us on gossamer - its strong as silk in its undertone but so light to devour and injest - gorgeous

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

Such is a beautiful write for a good night Sweet heart.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jim :) Julie

[Tiana]

Gorgeous poetry! Beautiful presentation ... Enjoyed it :)

[MsJewel]

Thanks again for your kind comments on my poetry. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[wordman]

and a beautiful poem of love with all the trimmings

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron Happy New Year :) Julie

[wordman]

happy newyear to you

[Matching Socks]

That was breathtaking Julie.
I can feel him... That felt good to read.
The one we love is always felt nearby.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[Lizardo]

This a nice poem about love, very well written and I personally love the first stanza.
This is really good and the I like emotion around it.
Great work!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[onceloved]

:) You always put so much beautiful feelings in your wrting for someone I love how soft and beautiful they are. Your words flow together with such a beautiful grace in them they as beautiful as butterfly wings are. Your poems and images you use they always compliments one another so beautifully. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

:) Your Welcome Julie.

[Woody]

oooooh! damn, I don't know what to say. exquisite!!!!!!!!!!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my kind friend. Julie