Falling...

~ just a scribble ~

 

         

                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

If I were a raindrop would you catch me

would you hold me and not let me go

‘til dark skies that shuddered with lightning

                     would brighten

                                 painting rainbows

 

Kissing the sky like a sweet dream

                 where whip cream

                        clouds will be found…

 

If I were a raindrop

                        would you catch me

or would you let me fall to the ground?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

vignettes of love from MsJewel ..absolutely beautiful ... your poem put me in the picture .. i am the picture .. kissing the sky in gentle rain .. so delightful, sensual and selfless in love .. i must put this one in the ol' library for sure .. such a pleasant enjoyable read!!
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[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

If he were smart he would catch you and place you upon his lips.
No doubt he'll do something like, how could he not.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) julie

[Riverz]

yeah.................falling

[MsJewel]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem :) Julie

[Riverz]

yer so welcome.