Had The Sun Not Set

~ would have, could have...should have? ~

photo compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Yes, we would have kissed

if he had been mine…

 

In Augusts’ warm mist

when ripe on the vine

were strawberries sweet

and luscious to lips

just longing to meet

in soft little sips

 

The sun was a fire

through clouds of whip cream

‘til fervent desire

in a sky of dreams

faded into the mist

of twilights soft threat

 

Yes, we would have kissed

had the sun not set

Reviews

[Trace]

The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

[MsJewel]

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read moreLay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...
Ok...yours is prettier. Hugs, J

[Trace]

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress

[SmittyJas]

Its never to late for a kiss my sweet. We could meet at mid night under a romantic moon.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Jim :) Julie

[Droc]

Well this' a flawless jewel on velvet setting. That certainly can't be argued.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a lovely comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a wonderful write on unrequited love. You are truly skilful at this type of poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Rana]

So very close to perfection is this skilfully composed poem. Delightful :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

Those chances not met will haunt us…

[MsJewel]

Haunting...yes. :) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

Sensual magnificence pondering a kiss that would wait a life time. I always fall in love with you a little more whenever I read your work Julie.

Al

[MsJewel]

Yours is possibly the sweetest comment I've ever received. Thank you :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

why did the sun set........
beautiful poem!!!
loved it!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you dear one! :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome mam!!! :) :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A missed chance, but a fine poem, as always. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Rudi :) julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Too much, too little, too late? Your words flow so easily and are velvety soft....though filled with regret. A joy to read, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi! :) Julie

[Lizardo]

Another beautiful love poem, do love the ending line and the kind of ''left happiness'' that would of be,
I love the poem, Once again another masterpiece!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie