Night Whispers

~ a romantic sonnet ~

 

photo compliments of pinterest

 

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Visions are adrift in romantic skies

sparked with tenderness, breathless are my sighs

warmed in amethyst, starlight and moonbeams

soft as whisper, drifting towards my dreams

 

Captivating me with the loveliness

and the elegance of dreams softly dressed

only in your love…oh sweet fantasy

hypnotizing yes…mesmerizing me

 

Floating on a breeze, ruffling tender lace

taking me at once to that secret place

where we will linger in the dark of night

soft as a whisper until dawns first light

 

Romance fills the night, starlight and moonbeams

soft as a whisper drifting towards my dreams

~~~~~

Reviews

[ANTO]

Oh my the longing in this Julie is so intense - how can one pen such a write and still stay on this planet - I imagine your heart and soul were stretched to the stars as this one flowed out. Its gorgeous and the sonnet form takes it to another dimension.
Phewww - I think my boiler thermostat has failed again - is anyone else hot in here??

[MsJewel]

Sending you a little heat from sunny Southern California my sweet friend. :) Julie

[ANTO]

always welcome some Californian rays Julie - thank you
:))

[W R Stowe]

Awesome you made me escape into your dream nicely phrased thumbs up

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful sonnet, Julie. Love the classic poem form. Very well done. :) Rudi

[Dreamgirl23732]

The exquisite imagery added a unique beauty to the poem. I can't wait to read more of your work!

[blaqpearl]

i really do have a weakness for love poems Ms Jewel
and this one got me going "ah" and "ooh"
simply enchanting Ms Jewel...

thank you for sharing

[Afraa]

This truly gave 'beautiful' a whole new meaning. I can see what fifteen years of writing did to you. These words fit well together, resulting in gorgeous imagery. I have a weakness for rhyming poems, and this one was the final blow for me. Ms. Jewel, your mind and pen are naturals at this. Also, excellent job on the depiction of the piece. I am happy I came across such art.

Thank you for sharing!

[Leviathus Fortes]

Tenderly caressed by these beautiful words.

Thank you.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Gerry Legister]

beautiful, i like it because it is filled with such captivating fantasy

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Debra]

Absolutely enchanting. Well done!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Debra! :) Julie

[Debra]

You are welcome!

[~]

Lovely and playful. Imagery to die for.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

There is nothing more lovely than a breathless poem written by a breath taking women.

[MsJewel]

You are a very sweet man Alfred. Thank you :) Julie