This Night

~ a sensual little scribble ~

                        

 

                This night…

 

Let there only be moonlight

and your breath upon my skin

painting my cheeks a fevered blush

my lips softening the crush of yours

 

Eyes veiled with wishes,

souls wrapped in beams of light

exposing every secret

whispered sweet….passionate sips

between love’s kiss

 

For nothing is hidden…nor forbidden

not the power of my fragility

as weakened in your strength

pressing us closer together

 

I catch my breath…you breathe me in

               

Hearts beating wild,

 like the dance of a windblown flame

 captured

                                                      this night

       

                                                we breathe us

 

Reviews

[Elisa]

I knew I was going to love this from reading the first two lines. So sensual and passionate, but not aggressive or uncouth. I love that you can convey such a sexy scene while still keeping it classy. Perfect poem for someone's bae on Valentine's Day! Amazing job

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Elisa :) Julie

[Woody]

phew!!!!! stupendous! just a little scribble, huh. impossible to single out a line here.
simply amazing. another jewel MsJewel.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Woody. Yes, they are scribbles and heartprints...
:) Julie

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

Is love on words. The poem is a beauty paint of two lovers who could be burned on fire since first touch.
Exciting beauty, magical.
You paint the love with the elegant touch of masters.
Thanks for share your magic.

[MsJewel]

I apologize it has taken me so long to respond. Thank you for your kind and generous words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :) Julie

[Gerry Legister]

Sweet adorable and passionate, beautifully written

[MsJewel]

thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[onceloved]

This is very beautiful poetry Julie, it is the windows of ones soul, it speak volumes of ones true thoughts and feelings for another I could feel the beautiful longing in this one for the Beast. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

This speaks to the soul tugging at the heart while yelling at the mind to get on board. Rich and robust imagery with a perfect ending.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rico :) Julie

[W R Stowe]

Very romantic description of one lovers submission of their frailty.Very nicely written.

[MsJewel]

thank you my sweet friend :) julie

[W R Stowe]

Your very welcome

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Beautifully articulated poem!☺

[MsJewel]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much. :) Julie

[Lenah Mehzabin]

You just take away our breath !
Even my heart started beating with this write with some memories
Gorgeous !!

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you :) julie

[rudelizard]

This poem is beautiful, seductive and enchanting beyond all measure. Quite the read, and very well scribbled.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie