Silent Dawn

~ just a scribble ~

         

                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

Silence finds me

naked and vulnerable

 

As the morning sun

plays against the white cloud of pillows

protecting my dreams

 

I ache

to feel the warmth of your lips

your taste on mine

as you tattoo your love upon my skin

strewn with fragrant flowers

glistening at your touch

 

How I miss waking up

to the beat of your heart

legs in tangled rapture

                                 secrets

 left exposed to the moonlight

                                                naked and vulnerable

 

                                                                       silence finds me

Reviews

[Trace]

To still feel the longing and loneliness of a lover long gone,
is something only a poet can describe in verse with such beauty, simplicity and grace.

This is sensual, and seductive, yet solemn and tempered with just a hint of wistfulness.

wonderful poetry my friend

Huggs, Trace

[MsJewel]

Your comments mean the world to me Trace. Thank you sweet beast :) Julie

[Melinda McQueen]

A vulnerable write. To miss someone in such a way that leaves you aching.
Good write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Melinda :) Julie

[sereenaoutloud]

As you tattoo your love upon my skin... beautiful!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Drake Lovvorn]

Could feel the words and understand them easily. Very Nice

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Drake :) Julie

[R Smith]

lovely writing from you Julie, always you find the heart of a poem and expose it to our view, this one is exceptional, your writing has a dream quality and draws me into the floating feeling created, lovely :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Willis Walker]

A really beautiful piece.

"Legs in tangled rapture" is such an incredibly emotive line and says so much about your mindset through all this. Really incredible.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

delicious! encapsulated sultry between the sounds of silence ... i feel like falling in love ...sigh! ;)
your expressions of romance are so fine Ms. J ..never a disappointing read ..thanks for being here and sharing your "scribbles" ;)
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for supporting my scribbles. I appreciate you :) Julie

[alf]

Hi Ms jewel. This is beautifully written and filled with emotion. Lost love and loneliness, I think. I really enjoyed the read, alf

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Jennesis]

Julie~
Such a flavorful sentiment in this. I love that the beginning and end are the same, such nice flow. it's so difficult to endure the absence of a lost love. This spoke to me~

Jennesis

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[Saddam]

Sweet and lovely..
Warmth as morning sun and beautiful as moon light.
Loved it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Saddam]

Welcome dear. Always my pleasure.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful, romantic and sensual. Very good, Julie. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Rudi :) Julie