The Days of Spring

~ memories of new love ~

The Days of Spring

 

                                  art ~ Lauri Blank

 

 

A time for love, the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

as tender lace swept meadows fair

upon a breeze to tangle hair…

 

I reminisce, as far above

a whisper of falling in love

danced gracefully in flowery bliss

the sweetest scent upon my wrist

 

A gentle plume to fill the skies

the bluest blue...your lovely eyes

and in your kiss, a warm embrace

to blush my cheeks,

                         I

            still

                      can

                              taste

  

the morning sun and honey dew

tracing the curve of me and you

My heart fluttered…the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

 

Reviews

[Trace]

This is one of the prettiest poems of yours I have read in a long time.
Not that any of your poems are not pretty
But some flow so easily and sound so soft and sensual
When read out loud.

This has . Real feel to it
Like an actual feeling put to verse.

Excellent poetry my dear friend.

HUGGS. . Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean the world to me. Hugs, Julie

[Pash]

This poem is so great, i just feel it in my heart. I keep reading it over and over again and in no time I'll be reciting it

[RED]

What you have written is quite sensational, you made a very good poem!!

Way To Go!, and Keep It Up.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Nicely written and thanks for sharing, I enjoyed this piece too.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I sure can take note from a good teacher. love the poem and thanks for sharing.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful I love this so much makes me look forward to our Aussie spring

[Isabella Disney]

Very magical! Felt like I was transported to another world when reading! Great work :)

[Roland Petrov]

A perfect love poem. I'm giving you 100/100.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Roland :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

“I still can taste
the morning sun and honey dew
tracing the curve of me and you
My heart fluttered…the days of spring
of butterflies on painted wing”

Wonderful expressions

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

:) yvw

[RomaJ]

A delightful and lovely piece. The imagery is just Perfection, like a perfect Spring day.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Adam Adams]

To a poet, spring and winter .. these two seasons're alike wanderland where his love for all wanders across hearts. In winter, it wants to be cold, but as the shine of spring comes down, the heart glows more & searches new love.. to live a very new life along its curves. Memories are must in both seasons which keep heart always around ecstasy. Beautiful poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I love the days of Spring.
"My heart fluttered…the days of spring
of butterflies on painted wing"
Warm days and less clothing. Happy people wandering the field of flowers. Spring. Thank you Julie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[onceloved]

For those who have known you for a long time, we can read so much more in your poetry you always have an incredible ways expressing yourself so beautifully in them. Happy Easter my friend. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry. Happy Easter :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are always welcome Julie. I have come to know the many side of you because of your poetry that I have share with you it as been five years now. Some are very heartfelt one when someone we love very deeply are no longer here. And you have a very beautiful ways expressing what love mean to you and why. :)