So Sudden and So Sweet

~ a little love scribble ~

 

 

 

art ~ Steve Hanks

 

 

Soft from the night and lovely for the day

I turn to you

as mist would rise towards the dawn

in mornings first glimpse of the sun

 

You touch me

as sunlight would touch a bed of roses,

so sudden and so sweet

 

And I am warmed by the beam of light

that could not play without the tenderness of your eyes

the joy of your spirit

 

I am yours…you are mine…

                                                       soft and lovely

Reviews

[dan]

Julie, I watched a show on TV a long time ago that showed, using time-lapse photography, a rose as it began from a bud and then bloomed into full flower; I got the feeling that I was seeing something eerily similar as I read this lovely piece. You mention a 'mist,' while I recall dew drops on the buds as they opened. Such a serene and tranquil vision, love in full bloom. Outstanding imagery in use here. Bravo!! take care...dan

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Dan. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Valentine]

I expect that beam of light to be the reflection in his eyes. Valentine...Kudos ..super write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Kathie :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

Such a beautiful way to wake up.
To feel tha warm touch of the sun, of your lover.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[Dara]

Couldn't want for a better 'morning after' than this. Soft and romantic with a beautiful presentation that enhances the poetry. Love this one, Julie!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

[wordman]

I am yours and you are mine our souls softly entwined
as I look into your eye`s ,your smile makes my day
and my night without you my soul would be like a lost bird in flight

not bad for a beach girl

[MsJewel]

Thanks Ron :) Julie (proud to be a beach girl)

[sereenaoutloud]

I know i keep saying this but... Beautiful!! Sun-kissed was the word that came to mind when i read this! Another great write :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend.
:) julie

[Jamestown]

A beautiful piece full of love and adoration:)
Gorgeous sensual massage, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

Thank you James :) Julie

[Ruth]

Always a grabbing finale, melts my heart! Preciously beautiful! :)

[Ana B.]

a magical write....if i haven't said it before, i am a fan Julie :)

[Trace]

A beautiful expression of love and adoration

Very pretty poetry here.

Trace.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet beast! :) Julie

[onceloved]

Your poetry is always so inspiring when it come from the heart it oozes from your pen so beautifully you are definitely a very passionate person, it always show up in all of your writing. And one can always feel the warmth of you Julie, in them. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely compliment Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are welcome Julie. :) Larry