So Sudden and So Sweet

~ a little love scribble ~

 

 

 

art ~ Steve Hanks

 

 

Soft from the night and lovely for the day

I turn to you

as mist would rise towards the dawn

in mornings first glimpse of the sun

 

You touch me

as sunlight would touch a bed of roses,

so sudden and so sweet

 

And I am warmed by the beam of light

that could not play without the tenderness of your eyes

the joy of your spirit

 

I am yours…you are mine…

                                                       soft and lovely

Reviews

[dan]

Julie, I watched a show on TV a long time ago that showed, using time-lapse photography, a rose as it began from a bud and then bloomed into full flower; I got the feeling that I was seeing something eerily similar as I read this lovely piece. You mention a 'mist,' while I recall dew drops on the buds as they opened. Such a serene and tranquil vision, love in full bloom. Outstanding imagery in use here. Bravo!! take care...dan

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Dan. Thanks so much :) Julie

[W R Stowe]

Very descriptive analogy of how love is suppose to work very well penned Julie

Bill

[MsJewel]

Thank you Bill :) Julie

[W R Stowe]

your welcome julie

bill

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that sun does gently touch that bed of roses...and with a sudden and sweet reaction, the roses invite...invite the light...

i like the next to last line...reminds me of "suite judy blue eyes" by crosby , stills and nash..."i am yours, you are mine, you are what you are, you make it hard, yes you make it hard"

a soft and lovely poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Adam Adams]

Your poetry makes a vivid imagery of couples in my mind where they live a night together & wake up with a gentle touch of morn & share warmed kisses lying under the veil of lace-blanket. Beautiful work. Enjoyed it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

What every lover likes to.hear and appreciate. What every poet likes to envy. Your wonderful gift...:)....

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Sami. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with passion, love, romance. You combine the beauty of nature with sensuality in this one, Julie. "You touch me as sunlight would touch a bed of roses." Splendid simile! Lydi**