Flowers in the Rain

~ a little love scribble on a rainy afternoon ~

 

 

 

 

He brings me...

 

flowers in the rain

wild as they grow

my hair the silken storm

sweeping his pillow

his eyes the tender light

as two shadows blend

his hands the gentle guide

to the rainbows end

and when the thunder strikes

and petals softly fall

he gathers all my love

as moments seem to stall

in storms that rise again

and in our hearts remain

wild as they grow…

 

flowers in the rain

~~~

 

Reviews

[Brian]

"my hair the silken storm
sweeping his pillow
his eyes the tender light
as two shadows blend
his hands the gentle guide
to the rainbows end"

It doesn't get any better than this. Just so incredibly beautiful. I can picture every part of it. And I love everything I imagined. So expertly crafted! Fantastic, Julie. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[s y e]

This was just what I needed to read on this somewhat cold and rainy night here in Scotland. I loved this Julie and I agree 100% with what Brian said!

[MomzillaNC]

There’s an illusive dream penned in this tender love poem.

[Roland Petrov]

A floral bouquet of words dripping with moist fertility.

[Confuser]

Julie: It's like a gorgeous love song, like Something, George Harrison. The visual, he brings me wild flowers in the rain. Your mind is amazing girl!!! So sweet, I love it, LOVE it, like always. This is always a fun place to come to...just magnificent (love the artwork too). Thanks again you talented young lady. Thanks:) Dale.

[Avinash]

Intoxicating and enamoring amalgam of words which transcend their dimension and soothe your heart and senses and you do it quite consistently and I thank you every time.

[Briana O'Connor]

Very striking and memorable. I love the elegant way your words have been woven down the page. The love just seeps off the page. Such a beautiful comparison. Nicely penned.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Brianna :) Julie

[Miss Sharon]

Be still my beating heart! How romantic and filled with the tenderness of new love. I love this one Julie! ~Sharon

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Sharon. Thank you :) Julie

[Michael G. Smith]

It is a pleasure to read such talent. Each poem of yours that I read brings forth emotion.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Barbz]

Thank you for this lovely read. For me, it hit the spot! Beautifully veiled intimacy. Flowers blooming in my head.....Barbz

[MsJewel]

Thank you Barbz :) Julie

[sereenaoutloud]

so romantic and i love the flow of this one! The imagery you paint is beautiful and goes perfectly with the picture!!

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for your kind words :) Julie