Flowers in the Rain

~ a little love scribble on a rainy afternoon ~

 

 

 

 

He brings me...

 

flowers in the rain

wild as they grow

my hair the silken storm

sweeping his pillow

his eyes the tender light

as two shadows blend

his hands the gentle guide

to the rainbows end

and when the thunder strikes

and petals softly fall

he gathers all my love

as moments seem to stall

in storms that rise again

and in our hearts remain

wild as they grow…

 

flowers in the rain

~~~

 

Reviews

[Brian]

"my hair the silken storm
sweeping his pillow
his eyes the tender light
as two shadows blend
his hands the gentle guide
to the rainbows end"

It doesn't get any better than this. Just so incredibly beautiful. I can picture every part of it. And I love everything I imagined. So expertly crafted! Fantastic, Julie. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and words dear Poet. The description took reader to beautiful places and visions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear Julie.

Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[Rossen]

the writer somehow seems to live and breathe the poetry of romance...100/100

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Jimmy Yetts]

Tasteful yet titillating sensuality; atypically, the poetess arouses with sheer beauty.
A radiantly lovely, exquisitely written bit of work, MsJewel!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Frankie :) Julie

[Valentine]

Very beautiful and tender write. You hit me in the heart with this one. Valentine

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Kathie. Thank you :) Julie

[~]

Beautiful sentiments!!!
A love that shines through rainy parts of our life. Wild flowers are the best. :D :D

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh you know I am a romantic and I love the rain... I love the use of flowers, rain to describe how real love makes your flourish as an individual. Lovely work.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet cowboy! :) julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure dear Julie

[Ana B.]

A magical writing, with stunning thoughts and images, a most wonderful write :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ana :) Julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful love poem again, Julie. You have a special style that I like so much. Very well done and thank you for sharing this poem. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi. I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry - I'm a fan of yours as well. Have a beautiful day! :) Julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

My pleasure and thank you too. :) Rudi

[wordman]

a beautiful write Julie,you blended love with shadows and a gentle rain
to bring forth the images you painted for the reader .and the portrait is beautiful as well

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie