More than the Sun

~ just a little scribble ~

 

                     reinfried marass photography

 

 

Where rivers run and meet the tide
quickly to rise when by your side

and overflow
                 with a stir

as breath to breath, the softest purr
leaves silky lips

my
          hearts
                         undone

and I am warm
                                  more than the sun

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[ANTO]

Whoa - the intense almost melting heat when we are with 'the one' - combined with floods of emotions and the bodies physical floods - certainly chain reactions going off all over.
You are a master of understated class Julie.
Thanks for sharing this one.
:)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Anto. Thank you :) Julie

[WILDERNESS]

ha ........... simply beautiful

[guy drori]

Well gosh, this poem is very well written. Very strong usage of words which created a very vivid image in my head.
I was practically able to "feel" the poem due to your intense descriptions.
Glad I read this ! And thanks for sharing it

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

yes warmer than the sun sunshine with my baby

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jim :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

Loved the rhyme and flow of this one. A little hint of seduction and a glimpse into the future of love.

Very nice.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Troy :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

A most elegant scribble Ms Jewel. exquisite!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Andrew :) Julie

[sereenaoutloud]

I feel like i repeat myself when reviewing your work but it is always so very beautiful and elegant!
Such a pleasure to read Ms Jewels! :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words. A beautiful place to be and land. Thank you dear Julie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you John :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[Lydia Shutter]

Mmmmm....so seductive with a promise of sultry times to come! Great rhyme scheme. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi :) Julie

[Elisa]

I love the sense of softness from this. It's so simple and so sweet. Love it Julie!