More than the Sun

~ just a little scribble ~

 

                     reinfried marass photography

 

 

Where rivers run and meet the tide
quickly to rise when by your side

and overflow
                 with a stir

as breath to breath, the softest purr
leaves silky lips

my
          hearts
                         undone

and I am warm
                                  more than the sun

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[ANTO]

Whoa - the intense almost melting heat when we are with 'the one' - combined with floods of emotions and the bodies physical floods - certainly chain reactions going off all over.
You are a master of understated class Julie.
Thanks for sharing this one.
:)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Anto. Thank you :) Julie

[Dara]

"as breath to breath, the softest purr
leaves silky lips"

Beautiful images Julie and your words leave me feeling warm also!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

a sensual and beautiful write.

[R Smith]

always beautiful writing Julie, breath to breath from those silky lips is enough to undo any reservations i might have had, and like you say, warm, hotter than any sun, lovely stuff my friend :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A prelude to the summer, I love it, Julie. Well done. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Rudi :) Julie

[AaronFreitas]

I really like the rhyme scheme in this write Julie. For a little scribble it is pretty awesome! Good write :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for you kind words Aaron :) Julie

[Valentine]

Your writes are always so warm and inviting. Valentine

[MsJewel]

Thank you Kathie :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

That's absolutely gorgeous Julie!

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet lady :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

I adore the rhyme scheme in this. It is indeed a little scribble, but a little scribble that makes one sigh with satisfaction. Beautiful words, as always.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Luna. Thank you :) Julie

[Ken Simm.]

I think this may be the epitome of romance.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Ken :) Julie

[Ruth]

Such sensual warmth here, when the heart is open and enraptured, the universe itself seems to sing and sigh, lovely :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words Poppy :) Julie