No Escape

~ a sensual little scribble ~

 

                photo compliments of pinterest

 

 

There is no veil,

only the night between us...

the darkness clinging

 

his kiss

intoxicating to eager lips

    his face

all the beauty that I see

his hands

warmer than the slow pleasure

of the sun rising

unmasked in rapturous heat

 

my breath upon his cheek, my scent upon his skin

 

our whispers tangled in the sighs of night,

capturing

every wish and longing...

 

not a kiss,  not a look,

not a  touch

will escape

the darkness clinging…

 

 

Reviews

[Robert]

Julie,

As usual, the photograph, come on where do you find theses lovely pieces ? They a; ways go so well with your poetry. Such a sensual piece you have penned. I really enjoy the format of the piece , it flows as smoothly as the words you have written.

[MsJewel]

I find the photos online - they are almost as fun to find as writing the poem. I'm glad you enjoy them :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

so sublime ... we do cling to a good thing in the wee hours of the morning ...the cape of dawn still hiding form ... really appreciate these lines:
"warmer than the slow pleasure
of the sun rising" its such a treat to watch the sun arise and feel that warmth rising with it ...nice one Julie!
E.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Wow ! When you write sensual you throw in some sweet
romantic feeling, then the sensuous takes hold and binds
us males to the subject..... a portrait of love , picture of
ecstasy. Love it. Thank you.
---- Eagle

[SmittyJas]

just can't say enough about your lines and verses of beautiful poetry that cling together a woven story of love and reflections.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jim :) Julie

[B]

There is no escape
It takes so long to realize this
You run into nights
and think so much

and that kiss just replays
like a beautiful song
his eyes
his hands
his warmth

there is no running
and that is beautiful

[rubie]

Dripping with sensuality.

I love how you use form and structure to create meaning. The poem falls gently down the page, calling to mind the gentle movement of lovers.

Nice to discover a fellow romantic poet.

[The Brazilian Poet]

Yeah! This is the moment of love which no one may escape when it is deep and strong! Beautiful poem! Congratulaiions!

[Lydia Shutter]

Great sensuality in every line of this one. Perfect photo to accompany your words. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi :) Julie

[WILDERNESS]

Captures the mood just perfectly............ beautiful as the writer.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Saraswati]

Passionate..powerfull..ocult...deep..

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie