Awakening

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ Karol Bak

It’s you that awakens

 

the stars in my eyes

the moon in my soul

passion…

as if the skies

 

have wrapped me in your love

 

satin sheets of night

my heart surrendered

to your dark and light

 

You awaken me

Reviews

[JayceeC]

"the stars in my eyes//the moon in my soul" I love this description. It wraps your reader in a soft flow of love and happiness. It's a great analogy that sits and swirls in my mind. I'm not sure how you keep that soft romantic voice and tone write after write, but I always know where to find my warm fuzzies.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind words :) Julie

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A very nice piece.

Smooth flowing like a sigh of love on the wind.

Well written and with a very lovely picture.

[MsJewel]

Thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :

Thank you :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

Star factor four **** for excellent verses of fine poetry by a fine friend nice to be reading you again.

[RandomAuthorOverHere]

I read your profile. What do you mean you are not unique? I thought this was really different (in the best way).

[Philip Muls]

Erotic and romantic, nice flow. Leaves you wondering what you will do now you have been awakened.

[icelandicblue]

Lovely way to open one's eyes. The poem evokes a smoothly penned surrender.

[An owl on the moon]

I had to read this one after seeing the title. And how beautifully it confesses the enchantment that loving creates. I've known this awakening, and nothing on earth compares.

[B]

I miss you like crazy
Ofcourse
Once we find someone that really makes us wake up
Otherwise we are asleep and life is passing by quickly
until we see that spark

[Miss Sharon]

Beautifully written my dear! A softly sensual rhyme scheme and of course a wonderful theme presented flawlessly...as per your forte. ~Sharon

[WILDERNESS]

Romance par excellence............... and the poem.

[Angad Waraich]

I have said this before but seriously i can not read enough of your work Julie, another great piece.
Thank you for sharing.

-Angad