Awakening

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ Karol Bak

It’s you that awakens

 

the stars in my eyes

the moon in my soul

passion…

as if the skies

 

have wrapped me in your love

 

satin sheets of night

my heart surrendered

to your dark and light

 

You awaken me

Reviews

[JayceeC]

"the stars in my eyes//the moon in my soul" I love this description. It wraps your reader in a soft flow of love and happiness. It's a great analogy that sits and swirls in my mind. I'm not sure how you keep that soft romantic voice and tone write after write, but I always know where to find my warm fuzzies.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind words :) Julie

[Edis Radoncic]

I can really see the passion written in the poem! Nice work.

[1VJ]

Wonderfully conveyed, you've captured the emotion so beautifully.

[Aayushi]

Amazing poem...the stars in my eyes and the moon in my soul, vivid imagination; Lovely.

Aayushi :)

[Charly Priest]

The last four lines certainly describes powerfully that passion. Great poem.

[Adam Adams]

Even the love may awaken anyone... anything from deep slumber of fantasy. Loved the "Awakening" scribble of yous 'bout love, it has something unique to be understood that's, most of the times, only valued by legendary souls. Your poetry reminds me the theory of historian legends & love-gods who even still symbolizes the slate of love with possession of compassion. Very soft words you've used to create vivid imagery of love. Kinda delightful to read. Loved it.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... a soft romantic poem for
dreamers on moonlit nights when stars
are reflected in your eyes... Beautiful
poetry that lingers in my heart.
truly, Pat

[Saddam]

my heart surrendered
to your dark and light

You awaken me

That's pretty... Wrapping me into love.

[Troy Henson]

As always Julie....such beutiful description and feel8ng in your writing.

[Ken Simm.]

Consumate romance. Silk like words.

[Ruth]

Such awakening is often life changing, as always, stunning...