The Sweetest Sound

~ a naughty but nice little love scribble ~

 

                                                          photograph compliments of pinterest

 

In the soft

                                 in the warm

truth and secrets lay exposed

and nothing dwells but love...

composed from the windfall

of two hearts beating

with the thrill of me

          under you

 

we revel in the sweet

 

Nirvana in my eyes

                                 you…

tangled in my thighs

passion dripping blissful love

 

a naked sigh upon your lips…

                                the sweetest sound

                                                  in the soft

                                                                                  in the warm

         

Reviews

[Trace]

My favorite poetry is that which makes me smile,
And when I read your soft and sensual lines,
I can't help but feel those words working their magic on me.

It is always so good to read your wonderful poetry and to talk to you,

I have missed both terribly.

This is not just soft and warm,, it is dripping with passion and extremely HOT.

and I love it.

Thanks for sharing tonight.

BIG HUGGS,, Trace

[MsJewel]

xoxoxoxoxox
Julie

[Shaun OBrien]

Beautiful. That is really well written and very evocative.

[Adam Adams]

Warmed, raged & electrifying enough to set my heart on alight!!

Loved the playground of your words "in the soft. . . in the warm". Very deep & sensuously quite interesting to read. Nice imagery. Enjoyed reading it!

[SmittyJas]

Your such the good writer haven't read you in a while wondering how you been on the beach of California Lovely writing my dear Julie.

[WILDERNESS]

Ah wasn't I missing that, passion dripping blissful love, what imagery of words. At once the mood is shifted. You are the best dear....

[Lydia Shutter]

Tender and gentle words that are hot and spicy at the same time. Nice to read you again, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi. It is always lovely to see you! Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Sensual, romantic, with your own flare for form -- another softly sexy write from you.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[WastedTime]

Highly skilled. Glad to have read it.

impressive.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Valentine]

Sexy reminder to all I have missed. Valentine

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Where have you been hiding lately... what a way to heat up my day, a very hot n sexy poem. Being a leg man I love the thought of being wrapped in thighs.

[MsJewel]

Busy with work...and life...it's fun to pop in from time to time - and of course it is always lovely to see you Cowboy! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I hear you... life gets in the way of creativity sometimes... always a pleasure to read you.

[redzone]

aaahhh Julie, what a sensuously delicious treat your poem is... I have missed reading your words... "truth and secrets lay exposed and nothing dwells but love"... sigh...

redzone

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie